Opinions.....

SteveLoveMusic · 10-05-2008, 10:35 PM

My first production...

Just wanted to see what you guys thought?? Is there anything in it??

Steve Love - Untitled Bassy Number MKII.mp3

Mong · 10-05-2008, 11:18 PM

Good start. I liked the feedback effect you used. Just keep adding stuff to it really as it is a little bare at the moment.

sproggy · 11-05-2008, 02:57 PM

Need to sort out that whistle, which starts at 3:47 on the guitar sound, that's a bit painful Steve. How have you made that sound?

You could focus on the breakdown too, work it, build it. As it is, it just ends abrubtly.

And I don't like the combination of drum sounds, in particular that tom. Too much low-midrange clutter at times. I'd try a range of different sounds.

tom · 12-05-2008, 07:37 PM

what they said ^

also

kick/beat sounds a bit muddy/distorted, definatley some redlines being ridden here.

that lead sounds a bit raw. try adding some reverb and maybe some chrous to meaty it up a bit.

defo a decent effort though mate.

SteveLoveMusic · 12-05-2008, 11:51 PM

I will see what I can add/edit over the coming weeks.....

10-05-2008, 10:35 PM	#1 (permalink)
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10-05-2008, 11:18 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mong Get monged out with mong Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 4,734 Credits: 28,723	Good start. I liked the feedback effect you used. Just keep adding stuff to it really as it is a little bare at the moment. __________________ Monged & Dangerous - every Saturday @ 6pm UK time www.mongedoutradio.com

11-05-2008, 02:57 PM	#3 (permalink)
sproggy Manchester CityCentre Fan Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: 22.5m up Posts: 3,742 Credits: 60,680	Need to sort out that whistle, which starts at 3:47 on the guitar sound, that's a bit painful Steve. How have you made that sound? You could focus on the breakdown too, work it, build it. As it is, it just ends abrubtly. And I don't like the combination of drum sounds, in particular that tom. Too much low-midrange clutter at times. I'd try a range of different sounds. __________________ sproggy on MySpace sproggy on Soundclick

12-05-2008, 07:37 PM	#4 (permalink)
tom Frequency Specialist Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Westcountry Jungle Posts: 585 Credits: 43,914	what they said ^ also kick/beat sounds a bit muddy/distorted, definatley some redlines being ridden here. that lead sounds a bit raw. try adding some reverb and maybe some chrous to meaty it up a bit. defo a decent effort though mate. __________________ THAT'S SOME MIGHTY FINE NOISE THERE BOY AKA Sheer Kahn - Purveyor of Quality Beats and Bass FREE NOISE: http://www.soundclick.com/sheerkahn

12-05-2008, 11:51 PM	#5 (permalink)
SteveLoveMusic Dirty Chunky Housey Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Birmingham, UK Posts: 1,370 Credits: 3,066	I will see what I can add/edit over the coming weeks..... __________________ www.myspace.com/stevelovemusic DJSteveLove@Hotmail.co.uk Catch Me Every Sunday Night Live on Monged Out Radio 9-10PM UK Time :: Click here to view show thread :: Latest Mix... http://www.stickam.com/editMediaComm...&mId=177206929

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