hmmm

Mong · 03-06-2008, 10:37 PM

Dunno where I am going with this one

Tis just cobbled together at the moment:

download directly here

sproggy · 04-06-2008, 12:36 AM

Ooozes with potential m8.

Except for the bassline which is in need of a radical rethink. I would simplify it, pare it down a lot.

Danny Lee · 04-06-2008, 01:20 AM

there arer some really nice elements in that - but as sproggy says the bass its a lil all over place

nice beats and stuff man tho man, that blippy sound is cool

Mong · 04-06-2008, 09:48 AM

Thanx gents. There are two bass phrases, do you mean both or as I suspect the first one?

The second bass phrase comes in right at the end.

sproggy · 04-06-2008, 10:50 AM

Yeah Mong. The second bass phrase is better than the main one.

Mong · 04-06-2008, 12:42 PM

Thanks. Bass Phrase 1 is now dead hehe

Damian S · 04-06-2008, 01:00 PM

sounds ok so far. The kick may be a touch too heavy. Personally i would go for a slightly lighter kick, allowing the bassline to stand out more, and inject some funk into the rhythm of the bassline. make the track swing a little more

03-06-2008, 10:37 PM	#1 (permalink)
Mong Get monged out with mong Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 4,733 Credits: 28,700	hmmm Dunno where I am going with this one Tis just cobbled together at the moment: download directly here __________________ Monged & Dangerous - every Saturday @ 6pm UK time www.mongedoutradio.com

04-06-2008, 12:36 AM	#2 (permalink)
sproggy Manchester CityCentre Fan Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: 22.5m up Posts: 3,742 Credits: 60,670	Ooozes with potential m8. Except for the bassline which is in need of a radical rethink. I would simplify it, pare it down a lot. __________________ sproggy on MySpace sproggy on Soundclick

04-06-2008, 01:20 AM	#3 (permalink)
Danny Lee www.dannylee.net Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Wales Posts: 275 Credits: 2,137	there arer some really nice elements in that - but as sproggy says the bass its a lil all over place nice beats and stuff man tho man, that blippy sound is cool __________________ www.dannylee.net - Home of the North Wales DJ, Danny Lee

04-06-2008, 09:48 AM	#4 (permalink)
Mong Get monged out with mong Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 4,733 Credits: 28,700	Thanx gents. There are two bass phrases, do you mean both or as I suspect the first one? The second bass phrase comes in right at the end. __________________ Monged & Dangerous - every Saturday @ 6pm UK time www.mongedoutradio.com

04-06-2008, 10:50 AM	#5 (permalink)
sproggy Manchester CityCentre Fan Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: 22.5m up Posts: 3,742 Credits: 60,670	Yeah Mong. The second bass phrase is better than the main one. __________________ sproggy on MySpace sproggy on Soundclick

04-06-2008, 12:42 PM	#6 (permalink)
Mong Get monged out with mong Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 4,733 Credits: 28,700	Thanks. Bass Phrase 1 is now dead hehe __________________ Monged & Dangerous - every Saturday @ 6pm UK time www.mongedoutradio.com

04-06-2008, 01:00 PM	#7 (permalink)
Damian S Super Mongerator Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 630 Credits: 14,297	sounds ok so far. The kick may be a touch too heavy. Personally i would go for a slightly lighter kick, allowing the bassline to stand out more, and inject some funk into the rhythm of the bassline. make the track swing a little more __________________ http://www.damian-s.co.uk

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