» Circuitry

[Celestial]

Don't ask 'cause I don't know what's wrong with me. Creative juices are flowing so made another track called "Circuitry". Check it out in the linkie below or go to my site. Enjoy

Circuitry, created by Celestial Mind and presented through ACIDplanet.com

[sproggy]

Originally Posted by Celestial

Creative juices are flowing so made another track called "Circuitry".

Good to see you having a prolific stage. Hope it carries on that way.

Nice style to this, like that growling synth sound and the way you've used it. All sounds working rhythmically in this track, I like that. Melodic content a tiny bit lacking, could work on that a touch still.

Great work, keep it up.

[Celestial]

thanks dude

[Mong]

Not my bag but sounded well put together. Most electro stuff sounds tuneless to me anyhow this sounds as good as any of them. Try and get signed to a new label. The worst that will happen is that they will tell you what to improve.

[NinjaSix]

I like the general sound of this very much.

From a layman's point of view it sometimes feels like it's building towards something that never arrives, but that's a small criticism.

Good work.

[Celestial]

Thanks guys

[tom]

the intro percussion sounds very casio and the snare is a bit weak (try layering). Also the lead that comes in around 4:00 mark sounds a bit out of place.


bassline is very nice. but needs a little something (excitement? careful eqing? phaser? not sure what) to give it that special 'sparkle'.



Overall, very nice tune, though.