| Thanks kindly for the feedback gents; much appreciated!
The vocal is a dodgy recording really, it's a sample off youtube and so there's a degree of distortion. I tried to iron it out, but it's still evident. I just liked it! But perhaps if I experiment with some more synths I can negate the need for it.
The kick is an old-school techno drum sound; well spotted. I'll have another listen tomorrow ('tis late) and I'll see if I agree that something different is needed.
I think also, that it hasn't been arranged quite well enough. I'll have to have a play around and see if I can get everything where it should be.
One final thing, this recording isn't the best quality as it was produced on full volume in my interface and so I had to normalize it in exporting as an mp3. This means that there will be a degree of distortion in the mp3 version I posted here. Not an excuse of course...just it might have affected the quality a bit.
I shall begin taking these critics on-board and seeing if I can alter the track to achieve the best sound. Might take some time to complete though; been working on this track for a couple of months! Just been so busy and struggle to find time to work on it. I'm in it for the long-haul though. Would like to get track finished eventually and post a decent quality mp3 of it for all to download and use at their leisure.
Oh, one more thing - technical fault benny? How do you mean? |